Date: 26 Nov 2006 08:57 am Title: A Rose By Any Other Name
You got it exactly right. I just wish your story was longer:)
Date: 10 Jun 2006 08:58 am Title: A Rose By Any Other Name
Now, *this* is snappy repartee. A model of the form, in which no narrative is needed, no flabby dialogue is present, and the plot actually pivots to reveal something wonderful. Very deft writing. And funny doesn't hurt, either. Bless.