Date: 29 Oct 2008 07:38 am Title: Chapter 1
OMFG! This is hilarious! LOL! How did you ever keep track of the different teams? Color-coding? I certainly enjoyed meeting them all!
A couple of minor spelling errors which a good Beta should have caught. But all in all, very entertaining.
Keep up the good writing!
Author's Response: Sorry for the mis-spellings! No Beta! rnI'm glad you thought it was funny. rnAs to keeping the teams straight, I made a chart!rnThank you for the encouragement.
Date: 16 Oct 2008 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very funny, I liked it.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Thank you for reading!