Date: 01 Feb 2010 06:07 am Title: Chapter 1
#1: snort. only Jack. ::hugs both::
#2: "...Neither considered going home, both realizing it was better to be together, fighting each other, than alone fighting their respective nightmares. ..." Liked this. It's sort of linked to this line from #3: "...For if members of a team don't trust each other enough to fight openly, how can a stranger trust them?" Ouch.
#3: cracked me up. totally.
#4: Ouch. Jack's words at the end - major Ouch. Oh, Daniel.
#5: I'm sensing a whole new AU'verse here with Daniel moving in with Jack in DC :) Nicely, nicely done. (mmmmm, back rubs)
Thanks for this, it's been a pleasure to read!
Author's Response: Thank you! I had tossed an idea around for doing a "Jack and Daniel in DC" thing, but never did get around to it. Maybe one day. :-)
Date: 23 Jul 2008 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really, really liked this! Especially about how it progressed through the series, and I think I liked the last bit the most. Your Daniel is a lot like me, actually. Probably why I like it so much. :) It's also very well written, though, so overall I give this two out of two thumbs up! Great work!
Author's Response: Thank you! It's fun to try and get inside Daniel's head. Such an interesting place to be. :-)
Date: 22 Jul 2008 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
These are wonderful, but I adore this line: "For if members of a team don't trust each other enough to fight openly, how can a stranger trust them?" That is so, so true, and so fitting for this team. And some folks don't get that--but you get everything here.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm a firm believer in the value of conflict between people of good conscience. There can be no progress without dissent.