Date: 05 May 2008 08:48 am Title: Chapter 1
I love this story.
I love mpreg's.
Please write more in this series.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! There will be more, though the next story is still a work in progress.
Date: 02 May 2008 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh, my Lord! I laughed out loud quite a few times. A very funny and engaging story. There will be more, right?
Author's Response: Yay! Made you laugh! :D There will be another story, though I still have to write it.
Date: 01 May 2008 01:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh yay! A new installment, I hoped you'd write one.
This is great, I loved the marketplace scene best, I really did laugh out loud. Jack's dream was good, making him more sympathetic to Daniel's situation with some great visuals. The ending was touching, Jack proving that despite occasional (frequent) feet in mouth, he will be there for Daniel; it's nice mirroring of the end of Future Imperfect.
Lovely J-D banter, too many little things to note, and the discovery that it happened because they got high and did it on a genetic manipulation machine. Sigh. *Bright smile, sits up straight and waits for the next installment*
Author's Response: Thank you for the wonderfully detailed feedback! It's really helpful to know what parts of a story worked well for a reader. rnrnI do have another installment in mind. I've got a few snippets, though no actual story yet, so hopefully it won't be another year between sections!