Date: 21 Dec 2007 10:15 am Title: Chapter 3
Thanks for a good, long, plotty story! I hadn't figured out all the connections between the characters and really enjoyed the surprises.
I loved seeing Jack and Daniel in action again, with some Sam and Teal'c as well. (Poor Sam! All those babies!) Glad you're still writing SG-1!
Author's Response: I had great fun doing all the plotting. Some of the connections even surprised me.rnAnd I had to put Sam and Teal'c in the fic. I loved having them in the action.
Date: 18 Dec 2007 05:28 am Title: Chapter 3
Ah, babs, another gem! Classical J&D friendship, wohoo! :)
The story reads as a mystery with the intricate plot, not knowing for sure who works for whom, rich, vivid description of the Keeps which makes it alive and palpable. All paralleled by desparate search and rescue by Sam and Teal'c... but it's taking so long and in the end it's months before it's over... In the end you made me care for the people of the Keeps, even for Enak (whom I'd gladly zat at the beginning, lol), and I saw the change best through the children's eyes, through their transformation (especially Aridette) as the events unfolded.
Sorry for the ramble, and thank you for writing and sharing this story!