Date: 10 Aug 2009 09:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like how you switch back and forth, nice job of showing the team dynamics and how much they mean to each other.
Author's Response: Thank you! As much as this was primarily about Daniel, then about Daniel and Jack, it really was about all of them. It's always good to hear that it came through. This is still probably my favorite. It's always nice to know people are still reading it and enjoying it.
Date: 10 Sep 2007 09:17 am Title: Chapter 1
They met in the middle trying to save someone they each loved,I liked that it wasn't black and white.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! That's the thing about war - it is rarely as black and white as those back home like to think it is.