Date: 03 Feb 2007 07:34 pm Title: Instinctive
Wow. The . . . love scenes were . . . wow. The . . . sharing. The tenderness of the trust . . . wow. The confidence of the sharing . . . wow. Talk about the clueless. They SHOULD've been more instinctive about their own instincts! Complex thoughts, easily seen passed, if one could see passed the missed boat that both men thought they'd mised! Loved the tale. REALLY loved the beauty of their first time together.
Author's Response: What a lovely review! Thank you so much.
Date: 02 Sep 2006 06:18 pm Title: Instinctive
This is one of my favorite stories. It is funny and sweet and snarky and romantic. Jack and Daniel seem very much in character. I particularly like Daniel counting all the times Jack repeats himself the night of the date. :D
Author's Response: Thanks so much. That's very kind of you.