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Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2009 12:16 am Title: Ass-chewing 101

really awsome! I fully got into it! After recalling what episode it was! Absolutely loved all the praise for Daniel! Very life like representation of Jack (in my opinion anyway)!!!

Reviewer: AnnieB Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2008 10:19 pm Title: Ass-chewing 101

Nicely done. I liked seeing Jack get some "punishment" for taking Merrin though he did it with good intentions and it was great having Jack really "see" what Daniel does best.

Reviewer: Bella Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2006 11:40 am Title: Ass-chewing 101

Tee hee, I know you didn't expect me to find humor, but Jack having to sit in on a class taught by Daniel? Not as much torture as you'd think...Loved the thoughtful way you presented Daniel. Daniel as Daniel! Now there's a concept...

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Humour is good - it is a funny concept Jack having to take a sensitivity class and the"granola-eating, sandals-wearing dweeb" turn out to be an in-charge, non-dweebish Daniel. :) I was actually going for a touch of humour ~ Cheers, Alia

Reviewer: Maj_Cliffhanger Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2006 01:22 pm Title: Ass-chewing 101

Excellent story and explanation for the apparent lack of fall out Jack must have faced after this episode - but the ending seemed a little abrupt, which just basically means you left me wanting more! LOL! I kept waiting for Daniel to use Nyan as some kind of 'do not to judge a book by it's cover' example. I'd love to read a sequel that finishes this 'course'. Thanks for posting! Loved it.

Author's Response: Thank you -and I agree with you about the ending. I wasn't totally satisfied with it myself and I thank you for the critique. I just got to a point where I felt like I could end up rambling and getting very boring describing every word said in the class - so I forced the ending. I think I will finish the second bit - what I already have is the part after the test that Daniel mentions that students *may* be invited to participate in. There is definately room to flash back to more of the class though... ~~Thank you!

Reviewer: moms2398 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2006 01:50 am Title: Ass-chewing 101

Wonderful...I could just see Daniel at the head of the class. Wish I'd had a professor like him in college...sigh! Thank you for writing! MA

Author's Response: Mmmmm wouldn't that be nice? I did have some profs who taught quite like Daniel does in this - but none of them looked like Daniel, that's for certain! University might have been quite a different experience! :D ~~Thank you! Alia

Reviewer: sabrina Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2006 10:12 pm Title: Ass-chewing 101

That was really good. It put a nice ending to something that totally should have ruined Jack's career. I loved the line about while Jack may deserve the consequences of his actions, the SGC didn't. Excellent story. Would love to see a sequel that carries out the rest of the class.

Author's Response: Thank you sabrina! It was just such a huge loose end and I didn't believe that Hammond would have just let it slide - like you said it was just too huge a stupid stunt by Jack. I love that Hammond is a complex enough character that he might have taken this route instead of arresting him! ~ Thank you very much!

Reviewer: Virginia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2006 09:55 pm Title: Ass-chewing 101

Great Story! Jack absolutely deserved a reprimand and punishment for his stunt in "Learning Curve". And it's great to see him truly learning from the experience. Not just about what he did wrong, but about himself and his friend. :) Thanks for sharing! virginia

Author's Response: Thank you for sharing such nice FB! ~ He did deserve the works, but I'm glad that this might have been what he got instead. ~ Cheers, Alia

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