Date: 05 Jul 2006 07:57 am Title: Chapter 1
I love it!!! (but you know that already, snicker) It's a great story!
Author's Response: After almost-daily IMing I really don't know what to say but "Thank you" and Hugs backathcha! :-)
Date: 03 Jul 2006 07:50 am Title: Chapter 1
This is beautiful! I'd like to read more about this too.
I don't think Daniel would have been snarky though-- Sidewalk peddlers can't afford it. Plus he learned to be sarcastic from Jack! :-)
Author's Response: Wow, thank you! I *am* thinking about continuing the story, but I guess I'll have to wait for the boys to decide to tell me their tale :-) Oh, I don't think he'd be really snarky either, it was just a defence mechanism which was quickly shut off once he realized Jack was not a threat. Thanks for the observation and the feedback! Much appreciated!
Date: 02 Jul 2006 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love the image of Daniel as a young, starving artist.
I would love to read a follow-up dealing with the upcoming conversation between Jack and Daniel.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked him ;-) Hmmm...a follow up? Well, I'll certainly see what I can do. As a matter of fact, I was toying with an idea of going further with that storyline, I'm just not yet sure where. Thank you for the feedback!