Date: 13 Aug 2006 12:08 am Title: Chapter 1
well written, good story
too bad theres no second part
Date: 09 Aug 2006 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is a terribly dark story, but a well-written one. Daniel's imprisonment and mental torture is very hard for me to read as he despairs of being rescued. The last two sections, his rescue and return home, is simply heartbreaking.
Date: 23 May 2006 12:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was great. I have read your Sentinel stuff, but never Stargate. Any plans for a sequel?
Date: 12 May 2006 06:24 am Title: Chapter 1
Brilliantly written. You have a real talent for characterisation